【11408学习记录】考研英语写作精要：真题范文拆解+万能句型应用+每日一句突破

英语

写作

2006年考研英语真题小作文

​​Directions:​​
Write a letter to the department concerned to apply for financial aid for children in remote areas. You should specify what kind of child you want to help and how you will carry out your plan.
Write your letter in no less than 100 words. Write it neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.
Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter; use “Li Ming” instead.
Do not write the address. (10 points)

题目分析

这是一封写给相关部门的请求信。写信人李明希望通过为偏远地区的孩子提供经济援助，为“希望工程”贡献力量。李明在信中请求该部门帮助寻找符合条件的孩子，并说明了自己想援助的孩子的类型以及实施援助计划的方式。

写作思路

第一段​​

本文是一封写给相关部门的信，需要自我介绍，采用公务信函（问候致意 + 自我介绍 + 表明目的）的框架。

第二段​​

需要基于题目，灵活修改以下锦囊妙句，通过合理的串联，快速构建一篇内容翔实、理由充分的文章。以下是备选锦囊妙句：

锦囊妙句4​​

4. 我们需要10名志愿者，有相关经验者优先。此外，合作精神，守时的品质，以及平易近人的性格正是某人所看重/具备的。

We need 10 volunteers, preferably those with relevant experience. Furthermore, a cooperative spirit, punctuality, and an approachable personality are the most desirable qualities sb. is/are looking for./that sb. possess(es).

我需要你们帮助寻找一名候选人，偏远地区女孩优先。此外，勤奋、守时的品质，以及平易近人的性格正是我所看重的。

I need your help to find a candidate, preferably a girl from the remote area. Furthermore, diligence, punctuality, and an approachable personality are the most desirable qualities I am looking for.

​​锦囊妙句6​​

6. 以您非凡的专业知识，我们希望您能发表演讲，给学生提出有启发性的建议。

With your exceptional expertise, we hope you can deliver a speech offering inspirational advice to the students.

以我的专业知识，我希望给她提出有启发性的关于学习和人生的建议，并且每月资助她500元。

With my expertise, I hope to offer inspirational advice to her on study and life, while also sponsoring her with 500 yuan per month.

​​锦囊妙句15​​

15. 用新空调替换这些旧空调，让我们有一个更加舒服/安静的环境区做某事。

Replacing there old air conditioners with brand-new ones will provide us with a more comfortable/quiet environment for doing sth.

我将用新设备替换旧的供暖设备，让她有一个更加舒服的学习环境。

I will replace the old heating system with a brand-new one to provide her with a more comfortable environment for learning.

第三段​​

盼回复。

妙句成文​​

Dear Sir or Madam,
I hope this letter finds you well. I, a senior student, am writing this letter to ask for your assistance in finding a candidate for my contribution to Project Hope.

First and foremost, I need your help to find a candidate, preferably a girl from the remote area. Furthermore, diligence, punctuality, and an approachable personality are the most desirable qualities I am looking for. ​​[妙句4]​​ What is more, with my expertise, I hope to offer inspirational advice to her on study and life, while also sponsoring her with 500 yuan per month. ​​[妙句6]​​ Last but not least, I will replace the old heating system with a brand-new one to provide her with a more comfortable environment for learning. ​​[妙句15]​​

Looking forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming

每日一句

The Federal Circuit issued an unusual order stating that the case would be heard by all 12 of the court’s judges, rather than a typical panel of three, and that one issue it wants to evaluate is whether it should “reconsider” its State Street Bank ruling.(2010, Reading Comprehension, Part A Text 2)

词汇

evaluate: v. 评估，评判；评价；估价
evaluation: n. 评估；评价；估价
reconsider: v. 重新考虑，再斟酌

第一步：找谓语

The Federal Circuit issued an unusual order stating that the case would be heard by all 12 of the court’s judges, rather than a typical panel of three, and that one issue it wants to evaluate is whether it should “reconsider” its State Street Bank ruling.

第二步：断句

原句中有5处谓语动词，包含5件事，因此原句可以断开为5句：

• issued所在句子为原句主句
• would be heard所在句子为宾语order的同位语从句
• wants所在句子为issue的定语从句
• is所在句子为宾语order的同位语从句
• should "reconsider"所在句子为whether引导的表语从句

根据标点符号和连接词进行断句后就可以得到以下句子：

• The Federal Circuit issued an unusual order stating —— 主句
• that the case would be heard by all 12 of the court’s judges, rather than a typical panel of three, —— 同位语从句
• and that one issue …… is —— 同位语从句
• it wants to evaluate —— 定语从句
• whether it should “reconsider” its State Street Bank ruling. —— 表语从句

第三步：简化

主句

The Federal Circuit issued an unusual order stating

• 定冠词the修饰名词词组Federal Circuit
• 名词词组Federal Circuit为主句主语
• 动词issued为主句谓语
• 不定冠词an修饰名词order
• 形容词unusual修饰名词order
• 名词order为主句宾语
• 现在分词stating作为名词order的后置定语，修饰名词order

去掉扩展部分后就得到了主句核心：

• …… Federal Circuit issued …… stating ——联邦巡回上诉法院发布……声明

同位语从句

that the case would be heard by all 12 of the court’s judges, rather than a typical panel of three,

• that为从句引导词，为句子核心成分
• 定冠词the修饰名词case
• 名词case为从句主语
• 谓语动词would be heard为被动语态
• 介词短语by all 12为动作的执行者
• 介词短语of the court’s judges表示执行者的范围
• 并列连词rather than 连接并列部分a typical panel of three，通过对比说明动作的执行者的特殊性

去掉扩展部分后就得到了从句核心：

• that …… case would be heard …… —— 案件将会被……审理

同位语从句

and that one issue …… is ……

• 并列连词and连接两个that引导的同位语从句
• that为从句连接词
• 量词one修饰名词issue
• 名词issue为从句主语
• 系动词is为从句谓语

去掉扩展部分后就得到了从句核心：

• and that …… issue …… is …… —— 并且问题是……

定语从句

it wants to evaluate

• it 为从句主语
• 动词wants为从句谓语
• 非谓语动词to evaluate为从句宾语
• 从句省略了连接词that

去掉扩展部分后就得到了从句核心：

• it wants to evaluate —— 它想进行评估

表语从句

whether it should “reconsider” its State Street Bank ruling.

• whether 为从句引导词
• it为从句主语
• should “reconsider” 为从句谓语
• its State Street Bank修饰动名词ruling
• 动名词ruling为从句宾语

去掉扩展部分后就得到了从句核心：

• whether it should “reconsider” …… ruling —— 它是否需要重新考虑……裁决